http://blog.philipjohnjames.com/2010/03/18/spring-break-story-stub-2/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=spring-break-story-stub-2 The World Through Philip James' Eye Sat, 27 Mar 2010 01:03:38 +0000 hourly 1 http://blog.philipjohnjames.com/2010/03/18/spring-break-story-stub-2/comment-page-1/#comment-14 Philip Thu, 25 Mar 2010 06:54:43 +0000 http://blog.philipjohnjames.com/?p=41#comment-14 I'm not sure as of this precise moment where to go with it. I'd like to do something with flight, but I feel the dragon/rider mythos is kind of over and done with. I’m not sure as of this precise moment where to go with it. I’d like to do something with flight, but I feel the dragon/rider mythos is kind of over and done with.

]]> http://blog.philipjohnjames.com/2010/03/18/spring-break-story-stub-2/comment-page-1/#comment-11 Karin Sat, 20 Mar 2010 16:23:28 +0000 http://blog.philipjohnjames.com/?p=41#comment-11 Again a few grammar things. No big. A quick read through would catch them. I like your descriptors and I felt this one flowed more continuously than the last one. I'd love to see it expand. :) Again a few grammar things. No big. A quick read through would catch them. I like your descriptors and I felt this one flowed more continuously than the last one. I’d love to see it expand.

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